Magic: the Gathering, deck building question?

Get birds of paradise and noble heiarch or llanowar elves, fyhordern elves (I think that's how it's spelled), boreal druid, manamorphose (it doesn't really ramp, but it deck thins, which really helps), desperate ritual, rite of flame, and seething flame if on a budget. Take out expedition map, because all it ends up doing is searching for a land, and wanderer's twig is much better at that. Then, if you want an aggro ramp, which I ume you do, throw in a couple Akroma, angel of fury to firebreathe and get it out early, like on turn 4 or something. Also get things like fireball, which can use that mana to blast the opponent from their feet.